Soft Melodies in a Minor Key

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Wednesday, 01-Mar-2006 5:59:23

I know, or at least I suspect that one of my potential readers of this will recognize a couple lines. I dislike this poem, and think I could have done it more justice but I'm about to leave for school and I'm bored. So, you know who you are reader, see if you remember a couple lines out of this.

I cry to you, reaching out for your hand and praying that somehow, you can catch me.

Though with hesitence I leap into your open arms, I trust you yet I fear for my own sanity.

Laughter like melodies lilting and light flows between us and your voice is beginning to haunt me.

Casting the illusion aside, I take your hand in mine and we run.

Stand with me on mountains high as sweet night evanesces into dawn.

Run with me through twilight's flame in a forest of light and shadow.

Dance with me dear heart into the rain, and we'll laugh together.

With voices raised in immortal harmony, we'll sing those haunting verses.

Post 2 by poet (The premium poet) on Monday, 06-Mar-2006 15:01:28

Cala, the poem was stunning! You shouldn't have said it wans't your best, anything you do is wonderful.
I loved it. Hope more people will reply to this excellent work.